Originally Posted by sir gibo
because going on about my writing skills does not help me with confidence to do better on other things does it.
I'm not here to boost your confidence, I'm here to show you what you are doing wrong so you can fix it for next time. If you are really intent on adding content to a site like this, whether it be a guide or possibly a review, you are going to need to improve your writing skills. Ignoring a deficiency doesn't help you get better.